I have a 7th grade student right now working on his first five paragraph essay; it is about Homer's Odyssey. We used The Odyssey for Boys and Girls, the version retold by Alfred J. Church in 1906 (link is to a free PDF).
Our essay prompt is a traditional one, and I got it at TpT. He chose option #3 from The Odyssey Essay Assignment (FREE).
This is what we have done so far...
Step 1: read the text
Step 2: choose your essay prompt
Step 3: write your thesis statement
Step 4: revisit the text and make notecards
we color-coded the notecards and used five colors, one for each paragraph
Step 5: learn about outlines
Outlines: A Blueprint for Success
- Roman Numerals
I.
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Uppercase Letters
A.
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Arabic Numerals
1.
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Lowercase Letters
a.
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Small Roman Numerals
i.
Step 6: practice using outlines
again, I turned to TpT for some traditional Study Skills resources
- Outlines #1 - $1.98
writing an outline from a paragraph
Captain Jack Sparrow
Outlines #2
- $1.98
writing a paragraph from an outline
ice ages
Outlines #3
- $1.98
writing an outline from a paragraph
taste buds
writing a paragraph from an outline
body senses as warning devices
Outlines #4 - $1.98
writing an outline from a paragraph
REM sleep
writing an outline from a paragraph
*not* scaffolded
"Select a paragraph from any classroom textbook. Use outlining to take notes on the information."
Step 7: organize your notecards and convert them into an outline
Step 8:
learn about in-text citations
learning how to cite direct quotations is the 7th grade skill in my blog post Breaking Down the Skills Needed to Write a Research Paper
Writing in the Content Areas
by Amy Benjamin
Step 9: learn about "Throwaway Writing"
I have a blog post full of hilarious examples provided by my students
Reviving The Essay: How To Teach Structure Without Formula
by Gretchen Bernabei
Step 10: convert your outline into a rough draft
Step 11: choose quotes from the text to add to your rough draft
Step 12: look at mentor texts to find examples of concluding paragraphs
Breakfast on Mars and 37 Other Delectable Essays: Your Favorite Authors Take A Stab at the Dreaded Essay Assignment
edited by Rebecca Stern and Brad Wolfe
this is a FANTASTIC resource!
here's my blog post with the entire list of essay prompts & essays
knowing to take away "Throwaway Writing" is not the same as knowing what to replace it with!
for example, this child's first try at a concluding paragraph was
"So in conclusion: Just read my essay again if you don't understand my point."
Step 13: look at example of a research paper with footnotes & bibliography, compare a bibliography to a works cited page, note formatting of the paper
Step 14: type rough draft of essay in MLA style
Step 15: explain what a rubric is, choose a rubric that suits the assignment
- I like this blog post Middle School Writing Rubrics by Dr. Catlin Tucker because she includes three different rubrics (they are free)
- Middle School Argumentative Writing Rubric
- Middle School Informative Writing Rubric
- Middle School Narrative Writing Rubric
for a more general essay rubric, try this one: Essay Rubric (PDF)
Step 16: print essay rough draft, revise essay using rubric for guidance
Step 17: create works cited page
how to do a "hanging indent" in Pages
Purdue OWL
Step 18: print essay first revision, give to someone for feedback
Step 19: print essay second revision, edit essay carefully
Step 20: print final essay, use the chosen rubric to score your essay
We hand-wrote the index cards, the outline, and the rough draft. We then typed the rough draft, the two revised drafts, and the final essay.
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